Got To Give Credit Where Credit Is Due...
In the immortal words of the country song, "I've got to give credit where credit is due."
I acknowledged Matt Schafer by name for helping me out in regards to my Starcraft project, but did not do the same for the gentleman from my other writing group who clarified for me "show, don't tell." Given the importance of showing and not telling, this is an oversight.
So, thanks to Gary Henderson for clarifying that, which should be helpful not only in Chapter Seven of Escape from the Wastelands but in future writing endeavors and, if need be, revising older writing endeavors.