Here's an update on the projects set in my "Wastelands" universe... Battle for the Wastelands-I have received critiques on the finished manuscript from two of my five beta readers, with comments from one slated for later this week. One beta largely enjoyed the work, although on his recommendation I have switched the order of some scenes at the end and will look for opportunities to add descriptive language. The second beta pointed out some inconsistencies, namely a character with a wounded leg being able to jump around a lot in a fight scene. I'll need to fix those too.
Update on the "Wastelands" Projects
Update on the "Wastelands" Projects
Update on the "Wastelands" Projects
Here's an update on the projects set in my "Wastelands" universe... Battle for the Wastelands-I have received critiques on the finished manuscript from two of my five beta readers, with comments from one slated for later this week. One beta largely enjoyed the work, although on his recommendation I have switched the order of some scenes at the end and will look for opportunities to add descriptive language. The second beta pointed out some inconsistencies, namely a character with a wounded leg being able to jump around a lot in a fight scene. I'll need to fix those too.